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~
I was chosen by you
And through your eyes
I see you
And through your heart
I found me
Different ways to feel
Different thoughts to think
Bent by your mind
Watched by your dreams
Discover my potential
In your lies
Blurring our imaginations
Mistaken for hope
We were seperated by an ocean
The sand that was never there
Carried seeds that never grew
Floating into the void
Breathed like the dust
By a billion tiny creatures
That feed the whales
Whales of the past
Free to swim in the cold
Never understood
And always hunted
~
I was chosen by you
And through your eyes
I see you
And through your heart
I found me
Different ways to feel
Different thoughts to think
Bent by your mind
Watched by your dreams
Discover my potential
In your lies
Blurring our imaginations
Mistaken for hope
We were seperated by an ocean
The sand that was never there
Carried seeds that never grew
Floating into the void
Breathed like the dust
By a billion tiny creatures
That feed the whales
Whales of the past
Free to swim in the cold
Never understood
And always hunted
~
This started out one way - then ended up going another stranger direction... 
Comments and critique always welcome
Comments and critique always welcome
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I can tell this is another one of the write it as it comes poem. 
Quake......mmm...tasty
I really like the switching of perceptions back and forth. Keeps the reader on their toes. The whale was a bit wierd, buit I like it!!
::[Matrix7]::
DeviantMAG staff: Textures
Scary huh??
Quake......mmm...tasty
I really like the switching of perceptions back and forth. Keeps the reader on their toes. The whale was a bit wierd, buit I like it!!
::[Matrix7]::
DeviantMAG staff: Textures
Scary huh??